Yeah this is pretty classic Miller, Nick. Used points out the narrator which is also very Miller, whether it's a character's view or omni-narrator.
Here's some more narration I loved:
"... it gushes through high power hoses and slams against the base of his skull."
great image for the radioactive material seeping into his blood stream
"He follows a lover's quarrel in a crowded restaurant, isolating the voice, not missing a word."
The structure certainly adds to the pace. I can't help but fly over this list of things Matt's listening to despite the corporate lawyer refusing to help.
How about "Stick" teaching Matt?
"I was born blind, kid. On the street. And I made my way, so don't give with any more belly-aching or I'll flatten you."
Here's the Fixer, one of the laziest gangsters I've ever seen. Can't even repeat his threats:
"You're a set-up old man. I've made you flavor of the month in the boxing world, and you're going to make me a bundle of money-- when you throw tomorrow's fight. No arguments, murdock. The usual threats apply."
Because he's made those threats so many times they're now just printed on the back of his business card.
And while it's a few pages back, my last impression of the first issue are these panels (preceding the big splash of Stick and Matt on the roofs):
Love the use of all-black profiles and the colors in the background. it's so evocative of twilight and that time of evening.