Ted_Wolff
Rookie
OK FOLKS! Here's my second short story for my creative writing class. I thought I'd be a classy chum and share it with all of you so anyone out there with an assignment for class can pilfer it and turn it in. The requirement for this story was that it had to be historical. I chose the year 1941 for mine because it contained the music of big band and I had an idea of using Williams and DiMaggio's success as a metaphor for my story. In doing so, I pigeon-holed myself into not getting as much quality research as I wanted for the time and thus ended up using the story to vent my own incompetence!
Please only negative comments. If I only get positive comments then I cannot feel like I'm rebelling against the status quo and feel hardcore enough to flex and woo my wife. Here it is!
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A story about war: The Pesty Letter
Written: Theodore "The Odor E" Ted Wolff
Bird baths are for fowl play. This was news to Pesty, however, and he jerked a two strike pitch down the right field line for his team the Chronos, the ball crashing a feathered family’s haven as they washed, now showered, squawking over the foreign object that maimed the littlestâ€â€
Please only negative comments. If I only get positive comments then I cannot feel like I'm rebelling against the status quo and feel hardcore enough to flex and woo my wife. Here it is!
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A story about war: The Pesty Letter
Written: Theodore "The Odor E" Ted Wolff
Bird baths are for fowl play. This was news to Pesty, however, and he jerked a two strike pitch down the right field line for his team the Chronos, the ball crashing a feathered family’s haven as they washed, now showered, squawking over the foreign object that maimed the littlestâ€â€
